In terms of historical interest, the story of events promises to be very interesting. I would however, like you to think about what your personal reasons are for writing this account of your Great Great Grandfather.  You, the author, are the narrator. The time-line of events belong to your ancestor....

Thank you for the first Workshop and your comments so far.  You make some good points and I realise that I have been overly cautious in writing about my characters.  That “would have been” just has to go. I have done the first two exercises and it has convinced me...